I can feel the palpitation
Yes
It's going from my left brain to my hands
fingers, knee & toe
Feeding every atom
Faster& deeper like a snake
Blood, choler, phlegm and sperm
Dust, tree, rain and stone
All deciding the fate of the days-
An obvious yesterday
A happening today
And a pregnant tomorrow
Suddenly
It's all silent
Dark & dreary
Numb and cold
The Oxygen is becoming Carbon...
7 comments:
Blood, choler, phlegm and sperm
"Dust, tree, rain and stone
All deciding the fate of the days-
...And a pregnant tomorrow"
brilliant..the gushing noise of ruthless blood in your nerves...deciding the very fibre of life
and why is
The Oxygen is becoming Carbon... ???
does this have some enviromental connotations?
Thanx writer...well actly it's more abt the feeling of eternal process of life...from oxygen, different experience, days, life and finally to carbon...i tried that in a poetic journey:)
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the ending is d last bit of icing of d cake....
touched...
i want to name it carbon...
....anuraag....
loved that "Pregnant tomorrow"
Do i see some kind of creativity in you or am i dreaming? :)
all my dear readers thanx for your time and words..
delef: you are actually dreaming. As it's nice faculty so keep dreaming
Hello just visit your Blog again..Nice..
keep it up...
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