Peep into my eyes
and behold for a while
Float in my blood cells
sit upon my heart
the fusion of beats might tell you a story
how secluded medows search for sunshine
Hop to the right heart
listen to that cowboy story
how one day the the tiger kills the liar
Rise high and climb to the cells above
chaotic and creepy
wild and impulsive
soft and fragile
When you come out and find a lanky
never be confused-that's not me
nor am i that where you'd roamed around...
and behold for a while
Float in my blood cells
sit upon my heart
the fusion of beats might tell you a story
how secluded medows search for sunshine
Hop to the right heart
listen to that cowboy story
how one day the the tiger kills the liar
Rise high and climb to the cells above
chaotic and creepy
wild and impulsive
soft and fragile
When you come out and find a lanky
never be confused-that's not me
nor am i that where you'd roamed around...
6 comments:
A good one..flawless
the flow is brilliant...i read it twice
Hey it was very much like beaten poetry...like, there's smthng lurking in ma mind but then it refused to come out...so one sunny day i did this to me and finally it came out...so could we say this as the agony and ecstasy?? I thnik that really is!!
Thanx writer, noni and to all those souls who have given a few seconds of life to read (if not understand:))this...
if you keep writing the way you do, i m sure a lot of people will read them
very promising :) but i felt it fades out towards the end
oh thanx for all your confidence ma'm:)
@ adi buddy
perhaps it could be more tighter. but u know sometimes words become adamant to come up from their place. It exactly happened here
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